Monday, April 2, 2012

Phoebe's 100 word challenge

It was mothers day and Elizabeth was gowing to the pub and it was just gowing to be perfect. Evry body at the restrant was dilited and even she invited peppel to give her good lug and she got a wondfull card and flowrs and even she was dresst nieslee and she was very lucky bcause she got a cake and it was a nise pub it had nise food and suddenly the weather changed for the worst.

1 comment:

  1. A super effort Phoebe! It sounds like Elizabeth was having a wonderful time. I wonder what happened after the weather changed. You have a few words left to use, I wonder if you could add a bit on? Well done for working hard!

    I will help you with your full stops.


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