There was a man and a lady and they went on a cruise ship and the cruise ship went out of its port to the ocean until the weather changed for the worst and it took an hour to get water in it and it sank and all the lifeboats sunk and they sunk and had to swim back and avenchually they got back and got married and they never sor the ship again and it is still sinking but and then it got to holes in it and every one survived and that is the end
What an exciting thing to happen in a story Harrison! It must have been quite scary for your characters. I'm glad that they all survived. Well done!
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