Today was a sunny day so mummy and daddy took us to the zoo. We went in the morning and walked around and saw some giraffes and some monkeys. The monkeys were jumping around and eating bananas. They were very funny and silly. The giraffes have very long necks and were reaching up to get some leaves for their lunch. This made us hungry so we had our picnic by the lions. We finished our lunch and watched the lions eat their meat. We saw the clouds had come and it had gone dark. Mummy said we should go as the weather changed for the worst.
What a super piece of writing Caitlin! I really enjoyed reading it because it flowed very well and you included some lovely details. Well done!
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