Molly had a go at this week's 100 word challenge! She had to write a story in 100 words and include the phrase '...the weather changed for the worst ...' (so 106 words altogether).
What a fantastic job she has done! Can you believe she is only just 6?
One day Pawl and Mandy were getting married and it was a beautiful day as well.The bride was wairing a long white dress with rosses on and the groom was wairing a white shirt with a black waist coat and black trousers. When they were all dressed they got in the long black car and went to the church. They invited lots of people. When they got to the church all the gests wer allready there. The church was cuvered in purple flowers. When they went out side the weather changed for the worst it was raining. So they stayed inside and they had some food.
To find out more about the 100 word challenge, visit Mrs Skinner's website here.
Hello Molly!
ReplyDeleteWhat a super story for the prompt about the weather! You have described your characters really well with lots of details and colours. I can see that you are going to be a great writer and I hope you continue to write for the 100WC!
Wow! What a great 100 word challenge! I loved reading it. You have so many great adjectives. Well done Molly.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story Molly! I have a clear picture of the wedding and love how you wrote about the flowers. Well done Molly! A super effort!
ReplyDeleteHello Molly,
ReplyDeleteIf the post hadn't told me, I would never have guessed you were six. This is a wonderful piece of writing.
I hope you keep entering the 100WC. Well done!
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia